Tuesday, 19 March 2013

Feedback on ARCANE Magazine

This is our feedback that we gathered from our class, we found that our magazine has improved but still needs improving:

Good Points:

  • Black and White effect is effective as it suited our film
  • Direct mode of address, meaning showing our film in the right way to the audience.
  • Good Clean style 
  • Very Sophisticated
Bad Points:
  • Seems a bit arty
  • Change font color as little is red
  • font seems randomly placed
  • Too bigger space where world war Z is.
  • More Color is needed 
  • change the catch line
  • Include the actor's name within the magazine to inform the audience who he is.
  • Change the Capital B of Bastards to lower caps b. 

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