Monday, 26 November 2012

"Dirty Diamonds Draft 1" feedback

In class we showed our fellow students our short teaser trailer and we have gained many improvements to add and put into our film which include:
-Shorten the voice over to only the first two lines
-show a weapon getting prepared in the trailer.
-two guns shot on dirty diamonds
-Poring the diamonds onto the table
We have also played around with the editing and added a few new things into our trailer to build the suspense and suspicion in our short teaser trailer, we will keep the blog updated to as what we are doing with our teaser trailer and what improvements we add to it.

1 comment:

  1. This post needs tidying up and developing, Lee. It's not very clear as it stands.

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